It’s hard to fathom the inner self of a man
you hear him talk, “you should go”, but
he doesn’t like you to do
the influential allurement that he feels
he doesn’t want you to do, inside him
but he says the other way, follow him
and with a suspecting sharp smile
he gives you a “choose between”
the opportunity is yours in selecting
it’s up to you, really can’t tell, but you
unless he tells you what
jealousy, it might be
the best kept secret
of every man
hidden under his ass
try to know the truth?
you have to smell the icing
and taste the bitterer batter
but wait till he turns vitriolic
his actions he borrowed from a lunatic
jaundiced eyes he’s sporting
and that is him…
3 thoughts on “WRITING 201 : DAY 07 : “HE PUSHES BUT IT ACHES” – PROSE POETRY, FINGERS, ASSONANCE”
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Like a bittersweet contrast… I like your narration, very nice! 🙂
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thanks, Juliet…i like your comment…
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It’s like a concrete poem with a woman!!
https://cupandchaucer.wordpress.com/2015/02/24/writing201-fingers-prosepoem-assonance/
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