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i’ll share my story with you
about heartaches that cut through
it was like a knife
that pierced me to bleed
though it took a longer time
to close the opened crime
but by chance was randomly saved
by a special and loving heart so brave.
–oOo–
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Hi Ramsey, I have invited you to participate in 3-day 3-Quote challenge. Have a look: https://suyashchopra.wordpress.com/2015/07/27/3-day-3-quote-challenge-day-2/
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Sure!
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i hv wrtn a poem,l u pls tk a look….
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that was nice of you…you’ll make it…
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thank you,i just want people to read it..thank you for reading it..
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you’re most welcome!
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will you take a look at other note i.e. a story named monday..tell me my mistakes and my ability to write..i am good at short poems..but i want to do writing..
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You have a good story but it needs to be re-written. There are errors in grammar. But it is a good story telling about your suicide and near death…people know that English is not your native tongue, it is your second language. So, readers will understand that. Keep on writing! Don’t stop. You’ll succeed.
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can you help me in that,hat type of correction needed?
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Zereion, you don’t have to rewrite your post, it’s alright! Just go on writing your next piece. The world have already read “Monday” . I suggest you read a lot of English newspapers and books.This will help polish your English vocabulary. I’m sure you will be a good writer in the future. All writers start with the first step…Thank you for seeking help from me…Cheers!
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n dt story s long one,nxt time i l sumd up in very very short word,i ltry so..to convey my message shortly..
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keep on writing and don’t get so emotional! Cheer up!
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